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Monsterpede Script and Storyboard

Here’s the entire manuscript, with the storyboard thumbnails! Some of the thumbs have red in them–ignore that, I was trying to imagine where the text would go, but I realized that was futile and stopped. Some of the thumbs aren’t quite how I intend to draw the panel, but the script right now is pretty [...]

“Like a slimy oyster filled with metaphorical pearls!”

When I first started taking my writing to a critique group, I wanted to learn so badly that I wasn’t usually upset by criticism. I hadn’t expected how hard it would be to use the feedback, however. As an example, here’s the crappy-ass beginning of a novel I wrote in 2006: An hour ago, he [...]

Local writing group for Whatcom County

Just a reminder to writers in the area: Bellingham Writers Group meets on the third Monday of every month (that’s tomorrow, folks!). ANYONE can join, no matter their experience, as long as they’re serious about improving their craft and doing so in a constructive, positive environment. If you’re interested, the details are here. If you [...]